This is wonderful - I love the undercurrent of angst/pain to this and the second person/future tense works perfectly.
This is your dance, this love and frustration and eager self-righteousness, as you push and pull and spin and fight, both of you keeping up the momentum, both of you afraid what will happen if you only stood still.
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momijizukamori
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Date: 2008-03-20 03:05 pm (UTC)This is your dance, this love and frustration and eager self-righteousness, as you push and pull and spin and fight, both of you keeping up the momentum, both of you afraid what will happen if you only stood still.
*applauds*