This fic is fifteen kinds of brilliance, and your writing is absolutely amazing. I love the mix of short and long sentences, it worked so well and your expression and imagery are so unique, I love it. Especially this:
he’s choking on dead flowers, cloying, suffocating
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Date: 2008-01-29 10:48 am (UTC)This fic is fifteen kinds of brilliance, and your writing is absolutely amazing. I love the mix of short and long sentences, it worked so well and your expression and imagery are so unique, I love it. Especially this:
he’s choking on dead flowers, cloying, suffocating
GAH. Amazing.