Every single line of this thing is perfect. I could quote my favourite bits...but...HONESTLY...I would end up quoting the ENTIRE FIC.
I love when Freddie rubs his face in the dirt. Genius. (And by 'genius' I am referring to you, not him). Loved James too! I just love how they look up to him as some kind of god. Who wouldn't?
He pushed the grass -coloured mop out of his eyes This line was classic because literally a second before I read it I anticipated what he was going to have done to his hair. Grass coloured!! HEH. AND THEN IT WAS TRUE.
Because all his energy was focused on trying very hard not to look at the way her damp shirt was clinging to her skin, Teddy said “Wuh?” Oh, Teddy. You're silly.
MORE MORE MORE! You are never allowed to stop pumping these out. *grins* You know that, right?
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Date: 2007-08-23 01:17 am (UTC)Every single line of this thing is perfect. I could quote my favourite bits...but...HONESTLY...I would end up quoting the ENTIRE FIC.
I love when Freddie rubs his face in the dirt. Genius. (And by 'genius' I am referring to you, not him). Loved James too! I just love how they look up to him as some kind of god.
Who wouldn't?This line was classic because literally a second before I read it I anticipated what he was going to have done to his hair. Grass coloured!! HEH. AND THEN IT WAS TRUE.
Oh, Teddy. You're silly.
MORE MORE MORE! You are never allowed to stop pumping these out. *grins* You know that, right?