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So, I wrote fic. Gulp.

Title: Howling
Rating: U or G, depending on your location
Word count: 844
Warnings: Um, spoilers if you haven't read Deathly Hallows?


“Happy birthday, dear Haaaa-rrry…
Happy birthday to you!”


The kitchen of The Burrow exploded into cheers as Harry Potter leant forward, grinning, to blow out his thirty-three candles. Ron and George whistled long and loud, while James tried frantically to copy them and succeeded only in spitting all over Albus; Rose and Lily hopped up and down, clapping; Ginny planted a smiling kiss on her husband’s cheek before wrapping her arms around him and whispering in his ear.

Teddy Lupin leant his tall, gangly frame against a dresser and watched the clan scramble wildly for slices of Molly’s magnificent cake, a smile twinkling in his dark eyes. He pulled the note from his pocket and scanned it again. It’s important, she’d said when she thrust it at him, an earnest look on her face. There was a breeze blowing though the open kitchen door; she must be outside already.

He was five feet away from escaping the crowded kitchen when he was accosted by a small Weasley.

“Gerrof, Freddie,” Teddy complained, as the redheaded boy jumped for the note he still held in his hand. Undeterred, Freddie continued to bounce, and asked loudly,

“Why’s your hair that weird blue colour? Is it on purpose or did you just do it wrong today? Can you change my hair?”

Bounce, bounce, bounce. Glancing hurriedly at his watch, Teddy groaned inwardly and crouched down to look the kid in the eye.

“Well, I probably could, but it’s really painful, you know. Like a million gnomes biting you all over your head and setting it on fire. We’ll try it later, yeah mate?” He just registered the awestruck look on Freddie’s face before he legged it, skidding on a half-eaten pumpkin pasty as he ran out of the door.

The yard seemed deserted.

“Victoire?” He whispered warily. “It’s me. Vic?”

A hand grabbed his and they were running; Teddy got a faceful of leaves as she dragged him through the hedge and into the meadow.

“What’re you doing?” he sputtered, and Victoire looked back over her shoulder, calling “You’ll see!”

They came to a stop, suddenly, in the middle of the field.

“I want to try something,” she said, slightly breathlessly, and all the thoughts that had flashed unbidden through Teddy’s mind when she pressed the note into his hand came flooding back, because she was looking at him and her hair was glowing. How was her hair glowing?

“Like what?” he asked uncertainly, jamming his hands into his pockets.

“Isn’t it obvious?” she said, exasperated, and Teddy’s mouth went dry. “Don’t you know what night it is?”

“Um… Harry’s birthday?” This was confusing. “But what’s that got -”

“It’s the full moon,” Victoire whispered, her eyes bright, and she tossed her luminous hair back and howled.

Teddy felt a wholly irrational wave of irritation and hurt and embarrassment crash over him, mortified at the thoughts that had begun to form in his brain. This was Victoire. And this was stupid.

“This is stupid,” he said out loud. “I’m going back.”

She looked at him for a second, clearly hurt.

“But don’t you ever wonder?” she said slowly. “I mean, with our dads, and everything… Don’t you ever feel a bit, you know… wolfish?”

Teddy gave a loud sigh and flopped down into the grass. A soft thud moments later indicated Victoire had followed his example. They lay there in silence, staring at the moon. Finally, he said flatly, “I’m not a werewolf.”

“Obviously,” said Victoire, in a slightly haughty tone that made him want to remind her that he was two years older than she was, and taller, and stronger.

“Gran had me tested at St Mungo’s. I’m not a werewolf.”

She didn’t say anything. Teddy turned his head to look at her, only to find her deep blue eyes studying him intently. He swallowed, and quickly looked back at the moon.

“It’s not like I do anything particularly wolfish,” he began. “I mean, I don’t chase things, or bite people. Well, I think I bit Ron once, but I was teething, so it doesn’t count. It’s more like a feeling. In my chest. Sometimes, I wake up after a full moon, and I’ve got this ache. I don’t know how to explain it…” He trailed off into silence.

“Like your bones hurt, but not really,” said Victoire quietly. “Like an echo.”

He could feel where her arm lay in the grass, an inch from his.

“Yeah.” He swallowed again, hard. “Like an echo.”

He sat up, exhaling slowly, and put his arms around his knees. He bit his lip, and wished for something more than an echo to remember his parents by.

He heard Victoire sit up beside him.

“Your hair’s changed,” she said simply.

“What?” said Teddy, surprised.

“It’s sort of brown. You look older.”

He grinned to himself, and turned to look at her. He said, “Cheers, Victoire,” and a smile spread across her face. Still staring at each other, they burst out laughing, threw their heads back, and howled at the moon.

Date: 2007-08-17 11:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bishwop.livejournal.com
EEEEE!!! FIC FIC FIC

Yay, this was great!! I love your Teddy. And that they lay down on the grass next to eachother! Which reminds me of the iceskating bit in Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind (have you seen that?). Anyway, I squeed a bit =P

Also, they echo eachother saying "Like an echo" How poetic =) That's very cool.

because she was looking at him and her hair was glowing. How was her hair glowing?
Loved that bit too.

Date: 2007-08-17 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bishwop.livejournal.com
Also, FRED! That made me extremely happy and kind of sad at the same time. Freeeeed!! JKR said George called his son Fred, didn't she?

Date: 2007-08-17 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Yeah, Fred is George's son. :) I didn't want to spell it out though, because that's one of my pet fanfic peeves- writers who overexplain things. And I figured it was pretty obvious anyway :D

Ohh, Gred and Forge.

Date: 2007-08-17 01:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm glad you liked it! :D And I love Eternal Sunshine, I must have stolen that subconsciously. The glowy hair thing was mainly artistic license, but she's part Veela, right?

Oh, and I read that other fic that had the same title as yours, and yours was *way* better. And I can't remember exactly, but I think that they left Peter off the Map, which strikes me as historical revisionism of the worst kind. :)

Date: 2007-08-17 12:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] giveitlove.livejournal.com
Lovely =] And here I was thinking like Teddy and that Victoire had propositioned him but I like what you've written a lot!

Date: 2007-08-17 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Ahh, you know she'll proposition him sooner or later, it's just a matter of time... :)

Date: 2007-08-17 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkangsty42.livejournal.com
Hee! I loved it. You should write more of the next-gen funstuff.

Date: 2007-08-17 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Yay! I think I'm going to, those pesky younglings won't get out of my head. Except I'm pissed off now, because my Victoire is Veela-blonde like her mama, and then I saw some icons someone had made with a pale redheaded Victoire, and that would have been awesome. Curses.

Oh, well. But yay! You liked it! :)

Date: 2007-08-17 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkangsty42.livejournal.com
I always pictured her as a strawberry blonde. But that can be glow-y, too. Al aside, Weasley children must be redheads!

My crack provider of OBHWF goodness is down, and I'm going kind of mental.

Date: 2007-08-17 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
The lady makes an excellent point. It'll all be in the encyclopaedia anyway... I really do think I'm getting my hopes up about this book.

Oh noes! Where do you go for your Weasley-related needs? Argh, eljay's been dicking about with my comment notifications all day. Grrrr. Breathe.

Date: 2007-08-17 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darkangsty42.livejournal.com
I think I am as well. But since I've really only got one ongoing series fandom still being published, it's nice to have something to look forward to. What I'd love to have is JKR making a definitive family tree where all the wizarding families are on it.

Checkmated.com, but every time I try and log onto it, my interwebs freaks out.

Date: 2007-08-17 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mo-shmoe.livejournal.com
That was an extremely satisfying bit of fanfic. Short and sweet, just how I like it. Also: TEDDY!

I'm way impressed.

Date: 2007-08-17 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks! *blushes*

Hah, short and sweet is what I do best. Concision: great for fanfic, not so much for essays...

Date: 2007-08-17 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mellamohannah.livejournal.com
I love this! I love your Teddy and Victoire you've created, and little Fred was perfect. Any plans to write more? I really hope so. :)

Date: 2007-08-17 05:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D And I'm definitely going to write more, I just need a good idea!

Date: 2007-08-17 08:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] clouded-logic.livejournal.com
FREDDIE. I WAS DRINKING AT THE TIME AND IT NEARLY MADE ME CHOKE. *makes all of those many incomprehensible sounds which we've discussed*

That is possibly the most adorable child I have ever heard of. Bounce bounce bounce. ♥

Aww. That is so sweet. I really love the echo thing. Please write more.

Date: 2007-08-17 08:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
YAY YOU LIKED IT! *relief*

How could Freddie not be awesome? George is his dad! I do think he'd be a terror, though, which is why I loves him. And Teddy is my homeboy.

I will, I will! I just need more ideas! And I'm nearly finished a Tonks-centric Remus/Tonks I'm working on for [livejournal.com profile] rt_challenge. Eep! This writing lark is fun! But I need ideas! GIVE ME IDEAS OR I CAN WRITE NO MORE!

Date: 2007-08-17 08:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] clouded-logic.livejournal.com
Of course I liked it! Your writing is just awesome. And so so cute. <3

Hee, I think he'd be a terror too. I love those kinds of characters.

I'M SORRY, I FAIL AT IDEAS! You managed this one though, I'm sure you'll come up with something. :D

Date: 2007-08-17 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
You are so very nice to me!

Also, have you seen [livejournal.com profile] shitbox_project? It's not bashing Shoebox, it's a next gen thing and their Scorpius is HILARIOOOS.

I'm trying to think of songs that I could use. Songs! Everyone knows songs! :)

Date: 2007-08-17 08:59 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] clouded-logic.livejournal.com
I know. ^^

LMAO. This looks odd. I'll have to investigate further at some point...

Muse - Invincible! I just happen to love that song atm, rather than being actually helpful. :D

Date: 2007-08-17 09:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
I bum that song in the face! Ooh, that could work, actually. Overtones of teamwork, stronger together, that sort of thing. Nice one! Also, Matt Bellamy is teh sex.

Date: 2007-08-18 11:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
I had an idea! I'm going to write a sequel - same set up, a few years later. Not the most original of thoughts, but whatever! And I have lyrical inspiration!

Bloc Party, Blue Light:

And you didn't even notice
When the sky turned blue
And you couldn't tell the difference
Between me and you
And I nearly didn't notice
The gentlest feeling

You are the bluest light

AND I finished my Remus/Tonks fic! I can't post it until the 26th, but yay! Je suis on a roll!

Date: 2007-08-18 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
It's for the August ficathon, but the prompt that I chose doesn't come up until the 26th.

Date: 2007-08-17 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scarletshape.livejournal.com
I LOVED it. ♥ More?

Date: 2007-08-17 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

And yes, there will definitely be more. As soon as I have an idea...

Date: 2007-08-17 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dulcin.livejournal.com
Oh brilliant! I hadn't even factored in this part of their relationship-- that both their parents had been affected by werewolves! Wonderful work-- I hope to see more~! ♥

Date: 2007-08-17 10:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! :)

I love the werewolf thing, they're a pair of proper little cubs!

Date: 2007-08-19 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayslady.livejournal.com
*LOVING*

This was absolutely luverly!
“But don’t you ever wonder?” she said slowly. “I mean, with our dads, and everything… Don’t you ever feel a bit, you know… wolfish?”

You know I never considered that? And now I will never get it out of my head...Teddy and Victoire...naughty werewolf babies! ^^
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Date: 2007-08-19 11:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Thanks!

In my head I refer to them as 'the cubs' :)

Oh, and I added you back, because your entire profile made me go "Yes!" A Fish Called Wanda FTW!

Date: 2007-08-19 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayslady.livejournal.com
Woo for Fish Called Wanda friendage!
Plus, Buzzcocks icon love XD
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Date: 2007-08-19 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Don't call me stupid!

*smells own armpit*

Date: 2007-08-19 02:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayslady.livejournal.com
"I'm Harvey...Man..frn..tn..sn..I'm from the CIA!"

"Don't call me stupid..."
"Why on earth not?"
"Oooh you english are SO superior, aren't you!!"

Otto is my hero...although so is Wendy, for being so overly english...
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Date: 2007-08-19 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
I love the way Wendy gets changed for bed.

"The central message of Buddhism is NOT 'every man for himself!'"

I wish more people were like Otto... Especially when he's making Ken feel uncomfortable.

Date: 2007-08-19 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayslady.livejournal.com
"Ken...come on! You're a very attractive man...you're smart, you got...wonderful bones, great eyes and you dress really interestingly. We could have a lot of fun together, you and I, and I think we would be really good for each other. May I kiss you Ken?"

Absolute genius. Although I adore Michael Palin too...I think this is the only time we ever see him swear...since he seems to be the nicest man on the face of the planet...
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

Date: 2007-08-19 12:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tea-egg.livejournal.com
awwwu~ I loved it! So cute and sweet. it has such a peaceful-fun-happy kind of air to it

I've never read any Teddy/Victoir stuff (only teddy/james), but I really like the pairing ♥ :)

Date: 2007-08-19 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Aww, thanks!

And I've never read any Teddy/James. I think I should, in the interest of fairness :)

Date: 2007-08-19 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tea-egg.livejournal.com
The Rules of Being a Godson (http://sam-storyteller.livejournal.com/117432.html) is one of the best in my opinion. also one of the only ones that doesn't make Victoir into either a bitch-from-hell or a slut >___>

I also enjoyed year after Year (http://community.livejournal.com/hp_tng/21507.html)~ :D

Date: 2007-08-19 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
THanks for the recs! Aww, they were cute. Although they were mean to Victoire in the second one!

Date: 2007-08-20 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] abusing-sarcasm.livejournal.com
Very cool! I like the idea that they each have a little wolfieness in them. When I first read the epi, the first thing I thought was, "I wonder if JK put them together because of the werewolf thing?"

I like to think so. :)

Date: 2007-08-20 01:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophieisgod.livejournal.com
Thank you! And so do I :)

Date: 2008-04-07 06:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-am-girlfriday.livejournal.com
I love the idea of an echo...so good.

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