Oh Sophie, you're amazing! The descriptions of the landscape at the beginning were beautiful- 'The hot August sun was low, and a slow breeze was gently rippling the tall grass. The sky was stained pink and orange. It was quiet, apart from the low buzz of insects in the air'. Already it's very sexy.
I loved Freddie, James and Albus' little cameos, peeking and poking out from behind grass and mud and Teddy musing that James should never, ever use his initiative.
It also struck me here how beautiful and heartbreaking it is that the descendands of Lupin, Potter and Weasley can lark about like this on such a lovely day. The mention of Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes sent a little jolt through me at the thought of Fred and George but made me smile at the triumph that these post-DH fics represent.
And then there's Teddy and Victoire. I'm looking forward to reading your other ficlets asap- I want these two to be completely fleshed out for me and you're the one to see it done xXx
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Date: 2007-08-25 08:33 am (UTC)'The hot August sun was low, and a slow breeze was gently rippling the tall grass. The sky was stained pink and orange. It was quiet, apart from the low buzz of insects in the air'.
Already it's very sexy.
I loved Freddie, James and Albus' little cameos, peeking and poking out from behind grass and mud and Teddy musing that James should never, ever use his initiative.
It also struck me here how beautiful and heartbreaking it is that the descendands of Lupin, Potter and Weasley can lark about like this on such a lovely day. The mention of Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes sent a little jolt through me at the thought of Fred and George but made me smile at the triumph that these post-DH fics represent.
And then there's Teddy and Victoire. I'm looking forward to reading your other ficlets asap- I want these two to be completely fleshed out for me and you're the one to see it done xXx