I think the BoH would make a more effective ending, just because it is definitively THE END. And the 2nd and 3rd lines could probably be spaced out more, if you wanted to go with that.
I suppose it depends on whether you want to hit The Big Moments, like him leaving etc, or just have little scenes in their relationship. Like, your idea for "my noon, my midnight" could easily be shifted into Tonks' pregnancy, (after his return?) if you wanted to spread them out more.
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Date: 2007-08-23 02:32 am (UTC)I suppose it depends on whether you want to hit The Big Moments, like him leaving etc, or just have little scenes in their relationship. Like, your idea for "my noon, my midnight" could easily be shifted into Tonks' pregnancy, (after his return?) if you wanted to spread them out more.
But, I really like this. DO IT. :)