ext_45962 ([identity profile] templa-otmena.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sophieisgod 2007-09-18 12:38 am (UTC)

This is not bad smut. I know that there is smut in here but really it isn't smut. Smut is too... smutty a word to describe the wonderful happenings that are occuring between these two so very fleshed out characters. In a few ficlets you have developed Teddy and Victoire, their friends' and families and their world with some very, very lush prose and this is another lovely and very, very HAWT installment.

I've just picked out my Top *counts* Three bits here-
'smirking as his hair went mental.'
I love the word 'mental'. In fandom no matter who says it, Ron says it. The idea of Teddy's hair going mental is just- ngghghhghg.

'Sexy silence was not Teddy’s strong point. Victoire knew this, and did not bother to respond.'
Teddy Lupin has invaded my mind and soul.

“Right,” said Teddy, and his voice cracked slightly. “Time for some thrilling heroics.” With what he hoped was a suitably masterful gesture, he swept one of the counters clear.
THE Bit. This is gorgeous with a touch of Remus.

And to finish off I'd like top emphasise that this is amazing smut xXx

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