RIGHT. I AM ALL HYPER AFTER THE THEWLIS INTERVIEW. SO THIS WILL BE CAPSFUL.

I HAVE TO SAY IN ADVANCE, AFTER SEEING THE CUT - "DRUNKENNESS"???!!! *EXCITEMENT*

"CONGRATULATIONS TEDDY AND VICTOIRE"
EEEE!!

"Teddy Lupin drained his glass" LOL, IT BEGINS.

"the cool night air made everything sharper after the fuzziness of butterbeer"
Ooh, NICE description.

A VICTORY LAP of the field? THAT IS COMPLETELY INSPIRED. YOU ARE A GENIUS.

"Teddy groaned library and obediently set off at a canter." LOL TEDDY = HORSE.

"You do realise that your mum’s going to kill you in the morning? Literally, you won’t be alive anymore." HA.

I heart Drunken!Vic.

It was very disconcerting, the way that one of her movements would catch his eye and all of the thoughts would fall out of his head Again, VERY NICE description. Original and all that.

He looked down at her, and then looked away quickly, because the light from his wand was catching her cheekbones and making her hair glow.

AWW HE'S SO QUOTE. QUOTE? I MEAN CUTE. Sorry, quoting is on the brain. Also I've only just started properly quoting, have you noticed.


“Don’t go too far away, though. I’d miss you.”
‘I’, not ‘we’.
WHOA I SUDDENLY JUST TEARED UP. I think DRUNK!VIC has made me all flaily and drunken-like and emotional. That, and you're writing.

“They’d be proud of you,” said Victoire. Teddy shifted.

“I know that,” he said, suddenly uncomfortable. Harry had taken him aside at the party and told him so, his green eyes earnest and his hand on Teddy’s shoulder. His gran said it practically every day. He always felt awkward, and grateful.
SNIFF.

"Your hair is blushing,” she whispered, and then she brushed her lips against his, very softly.
!!!!!!!! HIS HAIR IS BLUSHING. THAT IS ADORABLE. And EEE!! first kiss!

"She’ll do something French…”
HEH.

Victoire tilted her head to look at him, and her face was all shadows and light.
Oooh, PRETTY description.

EEEE I LOVED IT. WORTH THE WAIT!

Did I win the longest quotey review prize? Did I did I?